Interim Critique

This went well though there were a few minor adjustments I needed to make. My branding worked well and represented me and my work well. The navigation was said to be simple and clear and the logo sat well in the top right hand corner.

Things I need to think about:

1) Text too greenà use grey for copy text instead?

2) Move contact up so more visible and easy to navigate.

3) In white space under logo have static bio

Thank You! Critique

After presenting my pdf of my watercolour designs I received a number of useful comments which will help me further develop this project. The main problem with the idea at the moment is that it lacks relevance to Manuel, there needs to be more of a link between the hotel design and the fictional character; I could possibly bring in his personality a bit more to get this connection. In addition, I need to find a better resolution to show these designs. Rather than just framing the images and 'sending' them to Manuel or holding an exhibition to show the paintings, I could make a more interactive piece. Ideas that spring to mind are:

1) Making a game- spot the difference using added Manuel objects.

2) Question and Answer quiz- if you get question correct Manuel pops up and congratulates you.

3) Learn spanish with Manuel!